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my favourite hobby is planing bunkers with josh planing bunkers are fun because you have a big hole in the ground and some to hide and somewhere to put your food in and you valuables and other of my other hobby are motorbike because they are fast and i like the sound of them and my other one is hunting is fun because you get to hold guns and have to be quite so you can hear the rabbits and shooting gun are cool because there are so meany guns to shoot i have shoot a 22 and a 308 and a slug gun these are my favourite hobby.
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ReplyDeleteHi marko wow this is a lot of writing that sound fun planing bunkers with josh and i like how you have explain what a bunker is and you shoots gun that's cool and you really no your guns are you ever going to make a bunker and are you ever gonna shoot another gun.
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